come up with ur own original rhymes here and people vote on whos is best and we may have some battles too lol, so let the tournement begin, so just make rhymes up dat kinda make sence at least lol

This is stupid, but I'll give it a go. What you mean by this is Keystyling I believe. Like Freestyle, except on keyboard haha.

Kind of pointless because written text involves drafting, forethought and exercising. This means the slowest witted person can make the best rhymes.

But yeah, I'll play along.

BTW, I rap like a Brit.

"Oh my f*cking God" they all say//
I hear it every f*cking day//
"Don't you know that doll's a guy?"//
"I tell you it's all a f*cking lie!"//
But they got no clue//
As to what's what and who's who//
They just sh*t talk //
All spit but no walk.//
So c'mon kid keep runnin' that trap//
Or open that gob up for horny man SaP//

So anyway//
I was talkin' to this choob//
Who says he's not a f*cking noob//
He calls himself matchbox//
Says he f*cking rox//
That HF is his f*cking expertise//
Man, beat that hoe with ease//
Bent him over hands and knees//
Made him beg for mercy please//
Moral of the story//
No pain no glory//
This mof*cka took it hard//
But keeps talkin' like a tard//

Trust.

it made no sence but i thouht it was good,

How doesn't that make sense? It's just me talking about my gaming life with the rest of the zoners.

Alright man i can kinda freestlye but i kinda cant do it on the comp i kinda get a beat going so its hard to do on the comp

well here goes


hes one ghay * mod

his name starts with j

but on zone hes knows as blacky or maybe the o fay

hes probley not even black probley just some little white wigger * who is livin it up rich

he comes on vogn acting tough i bet this fool cant even ride rough whats he trying to pull on me? hes nothing to me hes * hes a * fag he can suck a * what a little prick.........



o yeah btw u forgot to set the rules fool o well i guess this post is ok because u didnt say the rules yet u didnt say no cussing or anything and i cant get kicked out cuz im postin this in the right area it looks really ghay with those "*" i guess u have to use imagination for those

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And Blackie has piccies anyway :S

c3 just give it up//
you're about to see doll errupt//
Don't be dissing on big boy black//
Act tough but it's flow you lack//
Keep it together//
Don't go off track//
So don't attack//
When you've got no style//
Woot Dolly - hit 'em up wild//
Don't flame it to good ole J//
I think you just better lay the way//
Cause here comes doll with her big words rhyme//
Spit it out to you in flat amount of time//
Hoe.

what the fhuck is the point of this gay thread if we cant flame i mean really what the fhuck


and how can u say i have no stlye? u've nvr seen e b4 so shut ur little mouth

but that was an ok ryhme actually

its kinda hard to rap on vogn and the comp u know cuz like i say words like differntyl when i rap i pernouce em differntly so it looks wierd

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"A coward dies a thousand deaths; A soldier dies but once-2pac"
"Suicide is man's way of telling God, You can't fire me - I quit." - bill maher
"ROLF, is what a retarted dog says...."
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I can say you got no style because your flame isn't a flame. It's just an angry little boy.

hey dollface nice rhyme :x i can edit lyric to

Ure style is generic
Mine authentic made
I roll like a renegade
U need clinic aid
My techniques bizzare an ill
I scar and kill
U were a star until i served u like a bar and grill
Now I proceed to cook and grill ya
That all it took to kill ya
U better recognize me like i look familiar
U wanna battle?
U beat around the bush
Like U scared to lick pussy so eat around the tush
I need a clown to push
Someone that I can bully
Wait a minute I don't think U understand fully
See me without a style is like mustard without the Heinz
I lead the new school, youre a Busta without the Rhymes
Ill crush the * out your lines

nice ryhme vice i liked that what did u mean by edit lyric?

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"A coward dies a thousand deaths; A soldier dies but once-2pac"
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"ROLF, is what a retarted dog says...."
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lol u ripper, thats eminem

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wow what a stupid thread we cant flame and theres no rules to the mc battles and everyone rips off songs

gee.............

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"ROLF, is what a retarted dog says...."
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correction 1 person stole from 8 mile so far

heres an idea guys if u got a mic free style battle over msn

nah quality wont be good on some peepps things, cuz sometimes it skips etc and u cant hear it

lol i know it eminem in tiki parking lot i was making fun of dollface,look at my reply,I can Edit Lyric to...So....

i knew that eminem rap sounded familiar...i just didnt kno where from


and ya ummm...c3...u got r0xed

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c3 doll owned you, enuff said. btw you can flame on vogn but dont get excessive with it like every post you and hippo have you "try" to flame me yet its funny watching you kiddies btw black means blackops smart one and if you took time to even kno me i aint wigger i dont listen to jus rap and i dont dress like one, i am white, i earn my money, i make decent amount, i wear all prep stores and sporting stores, i dont waste my time wit kids like u in real life only on here cuz its fun but if u want a freestyle battle lets go and btw i have a search engine that gives me the lyrics of anything someone trys to rip so i will know

lol dollface rip that why i rip my eminem lyric for make fun of her h34r:

How the hell did I rip? And who did I rip off? I'm a poet at heart, if you don't believe me I'll scan all my poetry and English awards :S

Dude, just because I can rhyme (like most females can), doesn't mean I "edit" as you say.

Nice little assumption though, dipsh*t.

Now let's try again.

Your style is just pathetic//
You think you've got it made//
But look around and sit on down//
Cause you just don't f*cking get it//
My rhymes are made from zero//
Not try'na be a hero//
But Doll just do not f*ck around//
So just look around and sit on down//
Cause Doll is here to hit it//
It's good to see you're trying//
But Doll just is not lying//
About the rhymes she busts//
I think you must//
Look twice before assuming//
Think twice before consuming//
A diss you made//
Without backup laid//
So maybe you should stop, think and check it//
Because your rip rhymes be stanky//
Don't analyse or critisize//
Just come on down and bring it//
I've got no time for no evidence//
No crime//
Just stop with the sh*t and spit it//

Skank.

owned

why the fck u spending time to writing those lyric for f*ck sake...what a lose of time..it not the way u write it the way u spell it :x

Please try to make sense before even posting.

its not a waste hell i have friends that got paid for writing free styles n people put them in books n * so its worth it if you got the right rythm

he just mad cuz he got r0xed

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yo
this is taz
im not a spaz
i run dis sh*it
yo, yo, fo shizzle dizzle
dats a big booti bizzle fo sizzel

dolly gots da rhyms
all other is just outta time
when it comes to me
no others can be
you hear the lyrics im spittin
u should hear the records im spinnin
i aint no lyricist
but ill turn you head like da exorcist
come to me wit a beat
and ill tear dat sh*it up

o dang, im the best dont u all think??

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*thumbs down* that jus was sad lol =P the top part sucked the bottom was alright till the last line, "and ill tear dat sh*it up"

lol, i cant rap i was just messin around, rofl, ill still own these noobs up though

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hihi my name is ben
i like to chew on pens
FO SHIGGITY

yo yo yo

Pfft duh. Ben just r0xed us all!

Ben the pen chewer just tore it up easy
Taz got rhymes but they're kind of cheesy
Like your sexually transmitted
OOPS
I think we hear the alarm
And Ben's got the charm
Fo shiggitying and ho diggitying
We got no chance
For freestyle romance
When Taz be present
With his styles on "BENT"
Similar to his
WOAH
Can't be hitting it up
When youre being bent over
Owned by leperechaun chode
And his two hanging clovers.
So give up and pass the mic
Because it's Ben we f*cking like
Taz keep trying
Keep trying it hard
And maybe one day
You'll stop rhymin' like a retard
Ben rocks this sh*t
Can you f*cking dig it?