i had one with an extra gradient map over it so it had more color, but i've seem to lost that one :P but what do you guys think of the rest ( placing sprite, C4D's )

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its got no focal point idk where to look at, or what i see

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The sprite is not obvious enough... it should be the focal.

also... whatever gradient map trick you are doing right now is not very good, sprites are supposed to be colorful, but this is kinda dull.

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this better ?

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for sure

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yes thats better, but let the sprite "pop out"

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